Comments on: Natural Consequences

By: Mary Vogt

Mary Vogt — Sun, 27 Dec 2009 05:27:29 +0000

I kind of liked it the first way too, although the title made less sense. I like the image of Rio persevering away, “Serena! Promise!” endlessly, while Serena just keeps painting along.

By: Mary Vogt

Mary Vogt — Sun, 27 Dec 2009 00:27:29 +0000

I kind of liked it the first way too, although the title made less sense. I like the image of Rio persevering away, “Serena! Promise!” endlessly, while Serena just keeps painting along.

By: Mary Vogt

Mary Vogt — Sat, 26 Dec 2009 22:27:29 +0000

I kind of liked it the first way too, although the title made less sense. I like the image of Rio persevering away, “Serena! Promise!” endlessly, while Serena just keeps painting along.

By: Rachel

Rachel — Fri, 25 Dec 2009 05:00:32 +0000

I can picture this SO clearly. No fair making me laugh that hard.

By: keyne

keyne — Fri, 25 Dec 2009 03:11:09 +0000

Ah, now the story makes much more sense.

By: Sierra

Sierra — Thu, 24 Dec 2009 19:05:45 +0000

yeah – WordPress cut off the end of the post – I think it's fixed now. And you were right, of course.

By: Rowan

Rowan — Thu, 24 Dec 2009 16:50:41 +0000

Was there meant to be more to this post? Like, say, Rio getting a face full of loaded paint brush, I'm guessing?